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    December 18

    我們一家都是神--作者:許采琇

     我們一家都是......神.---作者:許采琇

           我們一家的成員有:爸爸.媽媽.奶奶.阿伯.我.弟弟和妹妹.
           爸爸是力大無窮的大力氣神,不論再怎麼重再怎麼大的貨物他都能搬起來, 簡直像一位大力士.
           媽媽則是忙來忙去的巧手神,不管是洗衣.打掃.煮飯......等,她都會用他的巧手一次搞定.
           奶奶她是我的守護神,每當我肚子餓或我想怎麼樣她都會讓我去做.
           阿伯是貪吃神,不管甚麼東西,她都可以一口吃下去.
           呢!我是褓母之神,有時候爸媽出門我都會幫忙照顧弟妹.
           弟弟是一個貪玩神,不論在哪裡他都會帶她的玩具到那裡玩.
           妹妹則是恰北北之神,只要有人跟他搶東西他就會咬他.踢他......等.
           這些人都是我最愛的家人.
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    洪銘宏 洪wrote:
    這篇作文寫的很不錯喔，以後可以去參加作文比賽。
    23 Apr.
    笨☆ ★wrote:
    好厲害 '
    2 Jan.

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