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    October 02

    作文:勇敢的小露 作者:許采琇

    勇敢的小露

                             在一座茂密的森林裡,那裡不遠有一片大海,大海旁的沙地住著許多濱刺麥,其中有一顆叫小露.
                   有一天,小露聽到有人大叫:[哇!有人昏倒啦!]他趕緊去請醫生來,醫生說:[這種病需要一種花,那種花的名子叫百合花,他只要聞到這種花的氣味就會好了!]於是,小露決定要出發去找百合花 .
                   他來到黑泥沼澤,遇到噩魚,他問噩魚百合花在哪裡,噩魚說:[誰想告訴你,我要把你吃掉!]小露嚇的直發抖,就再這時候,突然有一陣風吹來,把小露給吹走了![剛剛真是千鈞一髮!]小露說
                   他走著走著看見有一道亮光,他朝那一道走去,結果看到一片青青草原,那裡有好多兔子,他看見有隻大野狼躲在草叢裡,他大喊:[大野狼來了!]大家急忙跑回洞裡,等大野狼走了之後,大家紛紛跟小露說謝謝,小露問大家百合花在那裡.有一隻老兔子說:[百合花在露西森林,這個森林在北邊]
                   小露一進到這座森林就有一種不舒服的感覺,因為那裡有蟒蛇.人的骨頭.還有像鬼的樹,他在森林裡繞了好幾圈都還找不到,可是他不會因為這種小錯折而放棄,突然有一陣強風把他吹的好遠,他醒來時眼前竟然是一片百合花園,他摘了一朶
                  他回到村子後,把百合花拿給醫生,醫生把花拿給病人聞,病人聞了以後病情好了一半,從此以後,大家如果有甚麼煩惱都會來找小露幫忙,小露也非常歡迎大家來找他
     
     
     

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